neovox

so, i just finished up my neovox article...and i have a feeling it's totally not what was asked for. I started out writing about the involvement of technology in children's lives, and how it shocked me, and then continued on just talking about my own personal interaction with electronics, sort of. A bit more formal than that, but all the same, i don't have a topic like "ipods" or "second life" (whatever that is, i'll read and find out i'm sure)... but i just feel like so much of what i do is not "intelligent" the way that it's desired. Granted, it is part of my style i guess, but that doesnt make me feel better when my writing is general and almost.. childish i guess, simply understood by most people, and i see other people's pieces and I'm just not formal or professional or wordy like them. I'm interested in seeing what other people wrote, definitely, currently just a bit un-self-esteemed about my piece. I mean, i like it, but I also feel like i'm just repeating so many statements that i've already said. i've started to feel that way about everything i say in this course... its frustrating and i mean, my opinions are changing but they are also still somewhat remaining the same. Oh well. Figured I'd post some of my reactionary thoughts about the assignment